do you feel me?

Filed in National by on September 23, 2008

pain and anger

piercing my soul

fist of rage pound my skull

arms want to wave

but held with a straight jacket

running in circles with no padded walls

to protect

me

from my anger

my rage

my pain

myself

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  1. Joanne Christian says:
    September 24, 2008 at 8:16 am

    Are you wearing a beret now and booking at coffee houses? LG–are you looking to calendar something at one of these appearances, and this is just the trailer? More to come later?

  2. A. Bundy says:
    September 24, 2008 at 12:16 pm

    Oh my God! Please stop writing these things. I am about to piss my pants.

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OH MY GOD!!! STOP IT!!!

    Seriously, I pray that someone else wrote this! Really, I hope you didn’t actually take the time to write this garbage yourself. And, even more importantly, I hope that you don’t actually think it is good. “…my rage…my pain…myself” HAHAHAHA!

    HAHAHA! You are such a tormented soul!! Teen angst!!

    Seriously, I had to stop typing like ten times because I am doubled over in laughter!

    You just made my day, donfeces! Thanks buddy. Keep up the good work.

    “do you feel me?” That is fucking priceless.

    Seriously, donVD, stick to being a retard. You are much better suited for that role. You sorry attempts at acting enlightened and intellectual are just plain sad.

  3. A. Bundy says:
    September 24, 2008 at 12:18 pm

    PLAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

    SNORT!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

    Wipe away tears….catch breath…reread poem…

    PLAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

  4. liberalgeek says:
    September 24, 2008 at 12:20 pm

    Oh… a poem… I see.

    Finally I agreed with A. Bundy…

  5. anon says:
    September 24, 2008 at 12:26 pm

    It might work if you smash a guitar at the end.

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